The gate log keeps a line for every man outside the wire, and Jake Smith’s line has been waiting for a pencil since midafternoon.
His return window was the gray hour before supper. That was the agreement, spoken at the map table like every agreement, logged the way this camp logs everything now. The gray hour came. The gray hour went. The light dropped out of the treeline the way it does in November, all at once, like something closing, and the sweep he was running stayed quiet, and the second hour of quiet is deeper than the first in a way no instrument at the radio bench can measure.
Camp Ridge has spent two weeks learning what it costs to be counted by an enemy that keeps books. Tonight it starts learning what it costs to have one of its own numbers missing from the count. The best young scout the county ever sharpened is somewhere past the wood line with a lead he would not let go of, and a father is standing at a gate deciding what he is allowed to do about it.
The camp knows exactly what it does when a stranger misses a window. Nobody ever wrote the doctrine for a son.
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