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Matt Cox's avatar

Every episode continues to get better and better. Nail biter is an understatement. The subtle tactical skills the Smith’s are showing and how they are learning to be more aware of their surroundings is perfectly written into the story. Every time I hear “this isn’t over” at the end of the episode I just yell “Noooooooo”. Can’t wait for the next one.

Chris Heaven's avatar

Thanks Matt! I appreciate your great feedback.

Samantha Evans's avatar

Ugh. Another nail biting cliffhanger !

Chris Heaven's avatar

You can pretty much count on a cliffhanger to end every episode. Just sayin. Lol.

Samantha Evans's avatar

Yea- some moreso than others, like this one

Chris Heaven's avatar

If you think that's bad wait until tomorrow!

Kegstalker's avatar

enjoying the story. and I have a question as I may have missed something because the last episode they were appearing to maybe go out for water the next day and possibly leave the premises. they had 6 days of water at that time. this episode starts out with them running out of water, is there another episode or?

Chris Heaven's avatar

Each episode does not represent one day. More importantly time does not stand still between episodes which is why I post an article every weekday. From one episode to the next it could be a week of time in the Remnant world. If each episode was one day we would never get down the road. Lol.

Kegstalker's avatar

copy and thanks for replying. New to this app and just wanted to make sure I didn't miss something.

Samantha Evans's avatar

Great- a whole week to hang. Good on you for keeping us all so engaged!

Edward Hasko's avatar

Ya know brother, your timing is perfect...lol Leaving us stranded in the middle of a developing fight. Great episode!

Chris Heaven's avatar

Woiuld I do that? Lol. At least you only have wait until tomorrow. 😎

John Treibel's avatar

As with all prior segments, this was EXCELLENT!

Chris, you are much better at writing and narrating this than I had anticipated! Excellent work!

Chris Heaven's avatar

I appreciate your kind words John! Godspeed.